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Splendid

I love the high-octane action, something reminds me about the Divergent series. It certainly unfolds like a movie which is a very good thing. Looking forward to the next update!

Loved. Loved Loved!

I generally never review a book that isn't more that 6 chapters in length, at least. But I am enamored with this story and the simplistic yet refined writing, vivid and immersive. And I need to know more, so I hope you update soon!!

Ensnares you with fascination.

I read that in record time because it is that enthralling. Seriously, the characters are just so darn lovable. Uncle Rick, Wes and little Jax is the cutest. Ella, my dear.I hope you update soon! xx

Stellar!!

I'm about halfway but I just had to hit a pause and commend the way you wrote this! The writing structure that so perfectly reflects the internal conflict of the other one.Her. Trying to break free, taunting, threatening and pushing. Like I am shook!!! I am truly impressed at how you weaved the plot-line and your writing style to the story. Wow!

Fantastic!

I really wished I read this sooner! Your writing style is the kind that I but hard copies of. I adore birdy, the quirky protagonist, with may I say has great taste in books. I must commend your pictorial writing style that is adeptly descriptive but not complex and daunting. Its cohesive and flows so serenely and perfectly that immerse a reader, paints a picture and transport us on this journey with the characters. A very cinematic experience. And often relatable factors. Adrian: "Do not engage! Do not engage! Count to ten!" You have no idea how much I had to chant that to myself, especially in my senior years of high school. You honestly have such a refined talent, and the writing was high level. A simplicity that resonates with readers to find themselves almost similar to them and the proficiency to show a completely original story. You have what it takes to make it big, top bestseller in amazon and net-lix adaptations, if you continue to write has you do. Your own voice and style but always keep evolving because there's always room for improvement. Stellar work, Gracie.

Distinctive!

Fascinating writing structure its like a screenplay, a very cinematic feel to it which really highlights your amorphous plot-line very well!

Deserves more than 5-stars

I am truly astounded. I was told in AS English class, Cambridge. that writing from a child's perspective is one of the most difficult perspective to proficiently author and you have done a brilliantly excellent execution of it. The innocence of the protagonist that maturely showcases what is happening with the plot. Wow, I am impressed how you adeptly wrote it in a innocent perception of a child. I am bested at how you decided to write this plot line. Excellent

Excellent!

First time, I am saying this to anyone. You can even look at the hundred reviews I have on my profile and only yours I can say, has a proficient writing structure. One authored like a published book. It mirrors the works of professional writers and I am truly impressed at the cohesion between the protagonist's thoughts and realizations that flows with the pace of the story. Writing is pictorial, so I was able to visualize everything you were writing so it was so much easier to immerse myself into the word you have recreated. LONG LIVE THE MAGE QUEEN

Superlative.

So I am no poet expert, and I feel you cannot critique poems because their a written reflection of the writers heart and inner most emotions and beings but I adore your stanzas and the personifications you use especially with the pillows, surrounding as a shoulder to cry on, chest to lean on e.t.c but to fully grasp your writing capabilities I am going to need for you to write me, you have raw potential, all you need to do is to refine it by practicing; writing and writing some more. I do love the poetic composition you have written but like I said I am no expert but it was in my IGCSE Cambridge syllabus, what I learnt from that, years ago. Always have cohesion, the stanzas must wind and flow like a river and I feel so far that yours does, as I said. I do need to read more to assess it better.

Intriguing

Interesting, I am intrigued. I hope you update soon, so I can review it in its entirety. But so far so good!