What is your opinion?
something lost
"it's an awesome story. loving it!"
A Great Read!
"Apologies for taking long to read your story, but here is your review. I will start off by saying that you have written a very unique story. I love the amount of detail that goes into every chapter. We are taken into another world instantly and every page feels like an adventure. Your grammar is good, the story develops nicely, and I like to visualize things in my mind when reading. If I can see it happening like a movie, even better. I will admit, I thought Alanis would be annoying, but as I read more, I saw her development. Your book has a bit of everything, which makes it all the more worth while to read. Congratulations on an awesome story!!"
Something For Everyone
"Something Lost is the type of book that can tailor to many audiences. Brimming with adventure, this tale follows the heroine, Alanis, as the finds herself on an accidental quest containing magic, mystical creatures, and even a knight in shining armor. When we meet her, Alanis seems like a typical young lady, but as time goes on, we find there is so much more to her. Chapter by chapter, the mysteries of her abilities unfold, as does this beautifully creative story. Overall, this is a well written, attention grabbing tale that will have any reader cheering on the MC. The characters are honest and lovable, and their bravery, though sometimes riddled with folly, makes them very easy to love. This is one I would definitely recommend."
Amazing
"I have only read the first chapter and i am intrigued. It's so well written and so full of imagination and it is very atmospheric as well! Simply amazing! "
Intriguing
"This story is really good. There were a few punctuation mistakes, but nothing atrocious that made it hard to understand. Its plot flowed nicely, and I really enjoyed the suspense. I feel bad for Alanis because she can't return to her home and she's discovered that they're not the people that she thought they were, and am definitely curious as to what happens next. I love the originality of it too. The plot is fresh and new, not over-used like so many. All in all, it was really fun to read!"
Need more
"This book is great. The prologue got me from the start leaving me wanting more. Like seriously are the mystery woman and the mc meant go be together. This truly is a book that can go somewhere though there were some grammar mistakes they can easily be fixed and when are you going to update more. The questions, that need to be answered have me hooked to this book."
One of the best
"I have read this book first in Wattpad, and it's one of my favourites. What I love about it is the ongoing suspence. Seriously it never stops, just when you thought you know something, another appears. Also, the structure and the description of this book is so beautiful, it really flows and pulls you in. The characters are all unique, and sometimes would do things that make you want to pull your hair out. They're real, that's what I am saying. Also, what I love about this story is it's not predictable. Alanis, the main character, really goes through some serious shit that you can't help but root for her in every situation. The author really knows how to pull on your heart strings as well, and I am really excited to see what else is there. "
Queen of mystery
"I have to admit, I'm not into mystery books, sort of grew out of it after the Nancy Drew phase, but this book is so much more than mystery. It's fantasy, and the author does a great job of world-building and establishing characters. The prologue is awesome, found myself really worried about the MC and wanting to know if she was okay in later chapters. There's adventure from the get-go, a journey to get back to the MC's hometown while also trying to understand how she left in the first place? Lastly, I'm sensing something like the home the MC wants to get back to, is actually evil and dystopian? If so, this is my cup of tea and I definitely can't wait for further updates!"
Here's the Deal,
"I really like it! It's structure well, the plot seems relatively thought out and I can see a clear and pristine goal for the main character already! Your grammar is pleasing to the eyes and I'm excited to see what else there is to the story! Keep up the great work!"
