The Weather
The weather was overcast. Flood alerts were issued due to the heavy rain. Some people hurried to their cars while others sought shelter. The roads were congested with traffic. Amidst all this chaos, a girl stood silently observing the situation. Her emotions mirrored the weather. She let out a sigh and dreaded the thought of making her way home in the dark, gloomy weather.
As she walked, she felt some strange. Although everything seemed normal around her, she felt something wrong. A strange heaviness dawned on her heart. As if something bad was going to happen. She looked at the road and saw a strange figure standing close to a pole. She squinted her eyes and the figure vanished. The girl decided to walk towards there. As she reached that place, she looked around, only to see the same figure standing where she stood before. Scared, she started to run away from that place.
That sort of incident happened to my mom years ago. She saw a floating head of a woman around three meters away from her.
The starting of your story is attention grabbing.