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Awesome!

"Loved everything about this book. Refreshing concept/plot! I cannot wait to see what happens next!!!"

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Great writer

"This book has me hooked! The writing is so good and the characters feel very refreshing"

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Great Start !

"My favorite part is that this book takes place in upstate NY, where I live. And upstate is known for its very cold winters but this story is about the child of Lucifer. Great story. I love the dialogue. "

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WOW

"WOW! What a story. Characters we're well written and let's talk about that plot, it was different and intriguing. I am invested. Excellent story. "

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I love this story!

"The plot and characters are excellent, and you describe everything vividly and beautiful. I found myself reading the whole thing through and being left wanting more. Brimstone is absolutely addictive and I can't wait to see what you will come up with next.. :D"

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Brimstone

"This book had a harry potter flair with a unique outlook on evil creatures such as demons, witches, and the like. I had a lot of fun following the main character and her friends as they discover who they are. There were times I felt Kas should have known certain aspects of her world, and at other times she seemed to magically know how her powers worked. This book kept me intrigued, and I love how the friends began opening up to each other in a trusting relationship, which is not typical with evil souls. I also loved that the characters all survived. I find it hard to read books where the author builds characters then destroy them."

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Original

"I know it is a completely different story, but sure as Hell gives me Sabrina (the Netflix series) vibes. It is beautifully written and compelles the reader to know what happens next. Good job! "

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love

"Absolutely loving this. Beautifully written, engaging and refreshingly different. Why aren't you published because I would pay to read this. Plot , characters everything is on point. You make me want to write better. Why aren't more people reading this? Thank you"

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Deliciously dark

"If you're a fan of the occult, you're in for a treat. Here's a story that will keep you on the edge of your seat as you travel a road of twists and turns straight to the pits of Hell. The author does a marvelous job keeping the reader engaged and the story ongoing without interruption. Well worth the read!"

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Brimstone

"Very dark and delightful story. Enjoyed it from beginning to end."

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Brimstone

"Very dark and delightful story. Enjoyed it from beginning to end."

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Belongs in a bookstore!

"As I was reading this, the main thing that kept popping into my head over and over again was that this book does not belong on Inkitt, it belongs in a bookstore! I enjoyed it immensely; the choice of words brought every scene to life! I loved the characters, even the headmistress (I should explain that I do not like her as a person but as a character). I can't really comment much on grammar and technical writing skills since English is not my first language, but I did not notice any major issues as I was reading your book. Overall, it was very well paced and the way you built tension was both satisfying and genius! I will definitely read the sequel!"

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Absolutely Engaging!

"I loved this story. It has all the makings of a blockbuster movie - intrigue, drama, romance, wit, and interesting dialogue. I didn't for a moment feel the boredom that sometimes come with reading a book. A great job of writing it I should say. The last chapter left me wondering if Lucifer was finally dead!"

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Lovely read.

"Wanted to read it all, but only made it halfway through until I couldn't hold back anymore. I really like the story so far. The POV perspective is something I thought I should use in mine as well. It's great and your execution is marvelous! Sometimes, I'm doing something downstairs and just start to think, "Mmh, what will...what if...then?" So to say your story captured my imagination should be most accurate. I really don't like the headmistress though. I want Kasdeya to tell her to shove her punishment, else she starts to think of some for when she will rule. Therefore, I suppose, Charon is a well-written character. :D I don't feel adequate enough to point out anything in your writing skills. Not that I noticed anything so far. I can only read on and learn, and so I will, meanwhile already flirting with Hellfire. Also, are you planning a paperback release? I want it, and I think it'll fit in well on the shelf next to my little wine collection. Best regards, O"

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Woah!

"The book is just a big woah! the author has a amazing writing style that makes me want to read more and more"

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Great....... ❤

"You were perfect Everywere and no need for reviews still I wanna demand you to write romance story once you finish your work please because just when I read the summary I was in love with the story...... Thank you so much ❤❤"

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Review

"I’m so hooked on this story "

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Brimstone

"I'm about to start chapter 5 and I already love this story. I can not wait to read on and see how this all folds. I do like how she's supposed to be all powerful yet people do not already fall at her feet because it, to me, is more unique and allows room for her to grow. I'm really excited to see how the relationship between Gabriel and Kas grows and evolves throughout the story since they already seem to click so well. You're an amazing writer. Keep up the good work!"

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Brimstone

"I really liked how smooth your writing is. It is easy to get lost in, and the premise helps with this as well. Overall I think it is a really good story."

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Premise is good

"The story has a promising start. I have only read the first chapter, and it has me hooked to read further. Humanizing what the average person considers as a monster takes guts, and you have made Mephisto sound very human. it was a bit cheesy at points, but for the most, it seemed to give a well-developed character. Good work!"

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