What is your opinion?
Intense
"Story and characters meld together to keep your readers looking forward to the next chapter "
Sword Maiden
"The cover is great! Name of the story and the cover looks great and goes hand-in-hand. The plot was good. Some grammatical errors but can be edited by re-reading or an editing app. Overall I loved it!"
The sword maiden
"The plot was great and I really enjoyed it. The writing style was smooth and suited the story. There were some grammar mistakes but those can be fixed with a bit of extra editing. Overall, great story!! (I especially love the name.)"
The Sword Madien
"I've read the first few chapters and I think you have a really good start. The story feels like a plot of a movie. The dialogue parts were great. You can almost feel the emotions that the characters are experiencing."
Gripping
"This was a really good start! I felt how scared Ravine was during the Ravager raid, and when trying to escape. I also really felt her guilt, thinking everyone getting captured was her fault. I also really felt her love for her family, particularly her little brother. It would be really interesting to see what you do next. Keep up the good work, Sofia"
Fast and Thrilling
"Medieval fantasy is something I hold close to heart, it features heroes and heroines, swords and shields, honour and mystery. This ticks all the boxes for what I like to see in such writing, It gave the characters a good development and personality that makes you want to read on, it flowed nicely and engaged with me very well. I look forward to more that will come. Well done!"
Awesome
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Awesome start!!
"This was definitely an interesting read. The grammar looks good and the plot is off to a solid start, can’t wait to see where this will go! This is just me but I don’t like a story that begins with background. I like to figure out that by either characters or narration. And the plot was kinda confusing in chapter 2. Or maybe I’m just slow XD But other than that, it’s a great start and I’m looking forward to see how this story will develop :) Great job!!"
Interesting
"I am super picky when I read if I’m not interested I simply do not finish reading, but this I read so fast and now I can’t wait for more to be added! Keep up the good work."
Wholesome
"Interesting story so far! It’s nice to find a clean, wholesome book with a real plot and no sex scenes. Definitely some grammatical/spelling errors, but nothing a quit edit won’t fix. I practice sword and own horses, so I am enjoying the major part both of those things play in this story. Good characters. I like Redwar a lot. "
Great plot
"I loved the plot of the story and the characters were plotted really well, maybe consider revising a few chapters? Overall the book was great and I loved it! 🥰❤️😊"
Recommended
"First of all, (as a advice) :) try making the book cover more creative to gain more attention for future readers, in my pov, i find it quite boring and not making a reader wanting to read. Starting from the summary, they're quite some grammatical mistakes and it continues like that, the first chapter was good enough to make a reader wanting to know what's next, overall it's a good read"
Nice start...
"Well, this seems like a story from a movie. You have very shallow but well-built descriptions that are mindblowing. You have an excellent way with your words. there isn't much to judge because these are just a few chapters, but you already have me hooked. I'm eagerly awaiting updates!!!"
3/5 ⭐️
"Things I enjoyed about the story: (-) The plot idea I loved how it seemed like something that would be in a movie. (-) The dialogue The way they talked sounded human, and not robotic, which is what a lot of authors have trouble with here on Inkitt. Great job! (-) Characters Ravine is an amazing protagonist, with lots of room to grow. Things I think could be improved: (-) The cover It's just not very appealing to me. And if this were my free time, I probably would not have picked this book. (-) Grammar There are a few grammar errors here and there, as well as a few in the summary. (-) Paragraph Formations Every time a character speaks, make a new paragraph. Paragraphs are typically 4-6 sentences. Keep that in mind."
