What is your opinion?
Awesome!!
"There was a great introduction to the characters without too much narration. That was awesome! As soon as that trio entered, I couldn’t stop reading. It just got better! Great job!! There are a lot of little grammar mistakes that need fixing and I’ve been finding them all over the place. I suggest doing some chapter checks every once in a while. But other than that, it was a really fun read! I’ll definitely be adding this to my continue list :)"
Interesting!
"This is a well written, interesting and fantastic read! I can't wait for more!"
Amazing!
"This book is awesome! Good job writer. Great imagery. Lovely characters. Good flow. Definitely recommend to everyone. "
Blood moon rising.
"We thoroughly enjoyed this story, and can recommend it to anyone wanting a slightly unusual read. None of your average girl falls for bad guy romance - no, this one has teeth. The twist at the end is great, the writing is generally very good, with just the occasional grammatical error. So come on everyone, let's cut loose from the norm, and read something that is a bit of a challenge for the brain - like this story."
MUST READ!!!
"WOW. I am just sitting on my chair with my mouth open. Those first 15 chapters (including the prologue) had me gripping the armrests as I read on. The plot of the story (so far) is amazing! There are no grammatical or punctuation errors, and the author's writing style is perfect. I recommend this to anyone who likes fantasy."
Blood Moon Rising
"This book draws you in immediately. The writing style is fantastic. Such amazing attention to detail and the characters are truly unique. So easy to get lost in this and the intensity is truly gripping. Sit back and get ready for an amazing read. The author is truly talented "
BLOOD MOON RISING
"This book is simply fantastic. I'ts a movie in your head and an emotional roller-coaster. You won't want to put it down once you start. So when it comes to a book you can excape the world through, you found it. I can't give this book enough praises. So good job Lizona Jane... you really did a great job on this book. Thank you for suggesting a swap review. 😍😍😍"
Love it!
"Love the story! It was well written. The summary really caught my attention. I love the characters and can’t wait to see what Krystal’s journey will lead her to :)"
Very well written.
"The story is quite intriguing as being very Interesting. Though I'm not entirely sure what the plot is going to be about as I'm aware this isn't finished yet, what I read so far has piqued my interest on wanting to know more about it. The characters are written in a good way, that don't make them seem written as flat/one-dimensional, which some beginner writers have a problem on writing good characters, that make them grow and change overtime. Your writing style is very good, very descriptive that I can very much envision everything that is going on. Any mistakes that comes from spelling or grammar, isn't anything major that discracts from the story. Overall this is a well written story and I recommend this to anyone who loves anything to do with vampires and the supernatural."
Mesmerizing
"OH MY GODDDDD! THIS STORY IS JUST SOOOOO GOOD! Phew! I still have some chapters left to read but I just can't help myself from posting a review first. I got goosebumps starting from the very beginning and I still have them. I just think it might do something to my heart with all the pounding it's been doing since the prologue. 😅 Anyways, hats off, author! I could give you more than five stars if I could. And I'm not even kidding! Keep it up!"
Blood moon rising
"I enjoyed reading your book and am looking forward to the story. The book cover is amazing 📒 and your prologue sure will attract a lot of readers. 🍁 Wishing u luck."
Majestically appealing and Intense!!!!!
"Damn damn! I think I need an Ice cream. I eat ice cream whenever I'm super excited or super bored. Seriously! Your book gave me chills all over and at some point I was grinning like a Cheshire cat. As I said in the comments section, you've got a way with words. You know just how to manipulate the words to suit your taste. Your grammar is on point, writing style is perfect, the plot is intriguing and I love how you vividly describe and engage the characters. Mystery lurk around your novel and keeps readers yearning for me. Wow! I'm speechless, wow wow, readers have no Idea what they're missing. Your book is extravagantly constructed. Congratulations! You're on your to success. Keep it up and work hard."
Interesting
"Very interesting book at my title states. This has an amazing twist on the supernatural world. With a read though to fix a couple grammatical mistakes, I would definitely read this book!"
CAPTIVATING!
"You have been successful in beautifully and vividly casting your thoughts in the format of a book. CONGRATULATIONS! The chemistry between the characters is undeniable. It was a splendid read! However, I spotted some portions where you might have overlooked the punctuation marks like a period at the end of dialogues (at very few places). It is not an earth-shaking problem:) A quick edit can fix it all, and make the book a masterpiece. Keep up the hardwork sweetheart 🤩"
An amazing story
"The story had me hooked since the first chapter. The plot is really good. I’m really enjoying the world you created. The characters are really likeable and well written. I’m looking forward to seeing how the rest of the story unfolds. 😊"
1st class kind of story.
"I loved how it was so down-to-earth and yet so evocative at the same time. Very much a pictorial writing that made me imagine everything clearly and almost feel their emotions too. I love a story that can make m e smile!"
Veryyy Interesting!!!
"Okay so I have read just a few chapters till yet but I am sooooooo in love with this book!!! It's soooo interesting!!! You are really good author!!! Keep it up!!💜💜"
Interesting
"Perfect! Every single writing and detail was absolutely amazing. My jaw was literally hitting the floor when I read this book. The author did an amazing job with the characters and the setting. I want to continue reading this book. I might say this is my third favorite online book"
Blood Moon Rising
"I like the loose, cheerful writing style that you have. I love the dynamic you created between the characters. The story is consistent, and I find myself discovering your world alongside the MC. I realized I was hooked to your book by the tenth chapter. I really want to see if Carter and Krystal will actually have a relationship, or if Carter is simply the ass that gets his family in trouble. The only thing I see is every now and then your wording changes. A final edit is all this story needs. Keep Writing Crixi"
Interesting Read
"Overall your story has been quite interesting to read, alot of unexpected twists. Your MC is quite cool, I love her sarcasm. I would just reccomend in your final edit (dont stress until you are done) to fix up the grammar a tad. I was still able to read it just fine, and I will impatiently wait for the next chapter. 😉 "
