What is your opinion?
Congratulations!
"Congratulations on winning second place in the Coalition awards! This story was an amazing read. The action was vivid and fast-paced, the characters engaging and the overall plot very interesting."
Dormant Love Review
"I read this book as a judge for the romance category of the 2021 Coalition Awards. This book came in second place, and it definitely deserved the sport. The title fits the story well, and the characters are fun to read about. They feel sort of larger than life, and the circumstances that bring them together have a tv drama feel to them. What I mean to say by that is that it sort of reminded me of a k-drama, and I mean that in the best way possible! Where this lost points for me is the writing itself. There are quite a few grammatical errors, and a lot of the time, it feel like many words are used to describe something simple. For example, in chapter two the opening says, "...the Juguar hurried past us in a hurry" or something along those lines. That particular line stuck out for me because I feel like it's a good example of what the focus needs to be on in the editing process - simplifying the language of the sentences to make for a less clunky read. I do think, however, that with some editing, this story will be a big winner, and I enjoyed it overall."
Dormant Love
"I’m really glad I was able to judge this story for the DEA. Without the competition I would have never forced myself to find time out of my busy life to actually sit down and read for once. This story was a blissful surprise for me. It started out a little slow, but the title and summary left me wanting to continue on. I really liked the flow of the story and growth seen in the characters. Very few grammatical errors, not something that would really distract you from the story. Overall, I really enjoyed reading your story. Congratulations on 1st place in the Romance category! -Emma Rose"
Must Read....
"This book started out slow...and has alot of filler parts that dont really move the story along.... but when certain parts are revealed, they are presented that would have you happy sad or mad... great job"
Review
"I gave you a five star for everything since I really love your writing style and you have a very intriguing plot that makes your readers and fans very attached to your story. I love the fact that it has some comedic parts even though if it is a serious story. Can’t wait for the next update. "
Awesome!
"I loved it! I am so thankful and grateful that I read it. Now I have something to look forward to in the future. I say that you should just keep on writing and never give up. You are talented and talented people do great things with the right support of course. Just know if you ever need me to cheer you up I will be here. Also, I know I said this in the comments but I am loving the characters and the details. It is just perfect. I won't lie to you so I will say there are minor grammar mistakes but that is understandable so have a fantastic day/night. I recommend this story to anyone who loves new writers and romance. You have a bright and beautiful future planned for you so keep working hard and you will not be disappointed."
Nice!!
"Got to say I was engrossed on it from the start, Love this. storry structure and flow is amazing. Love the characters, its really interesting. I would reccomend this to everyone who loves romance, mystrry, thrill. Kudos to the author!"
Intriguing Romance
"I love how this book is more character led, and there are hints of a growing romance and building drama. The title really matches the content since the characters have feelings for each other they don't understand because of certain circumstances that I don't want to spoil. As a result, there is a build of tension, which I think is important in writing, and it's refreshing to see chapters that are longer. Keep up the good work!"
Lovely 🥰
"I liked the authors writing style, not an overkill of info dumping with every minor detail like some I have read! Very lovely paced book with an interesting plot...waiting to see how it pans out! Recommended! "
Great read!
"Very interesting plot concept. I don’t typically read stories of this genre, but I found this one interesting. I’m curious to see where it goes. Nice work and keep going, I can't wait to read more!"
Woah!
"The content of the story is good...Each line had its own story and it was written in a way that readers could picture the entire thing...The style of the story is Great and I am looking forward to read more chapters 🥂"
Loved it!
"Summary really brings in the reader. Love the characters! Can’t wait to see what happens next :)"
Great work
"Loving everything in it. The characters, the plot and all 😊 A great story so far. Looking forward for the next updated chapters 💕💕"
Swooning
"The story has a very unique approach and the author's capability of weaving the characters so perfectly leaves me speechless. An amazing read overall. Though there are a few grammatical errors here and there but that's not gonna be a problem with a simple editing. Overall, I'm really and genuinely impressed with the storyline and looking forward to see how it eventually turns out. ❤️🙌"
Very cute❤
"Wow!! I mean extremely wow!!!! No words for review everything is beyond perfect I loved it so much. It's the perfect and best book I have read till today....You are fabulous ❤😋"
Dormant love
"The way the story is written is really captivating and I really enjoyed reading it. Great work"
Dormant Love
"An interesting plot concept considering one has forgotten who the other is and the other thinks they are dead. I spotted a few minor grammar errors, nothing too distracting. Good pacing in terms of progress and the romance aspect so far, too. It will be interesting to find out why they can't use Ander's real name in public and why they get headaches every time they think about each other, maybe it's because of repressed memories or the fact they can sense who the other is. Keep up the good work."
Nice
"Perfect for a light yet smothering read"
Dormant Love
"Great start.👏 I am really looking forward to it."
Bindhu
"No point... Its just lagging story..... Got frustrated in way....starting was good"
