What is your opinion?
So cute
"Such an amazing story. It was a great read and I think that the part where Lucas confessed was a bit rushed, but it was sweet and toward the end it’s also a bit rushed, but the story was great."
Great book
"I enjoyed reading your book. I think it was something different. And I hope to continue also. And I am so sorry I gave your review so late I was a bit busy the last week. "
Don't Smile At Me
"Winifred, an orphan, a girl, a soul with no happiness. That is, until she finds it in one man she once called friend, enemy, and goes by the name Lucas, Skeptic of what his tactics may be at first, she comes to know of something that comes from as a large surprise for her. He gets the girl, and wishes to have it no other way. She gets a goof, yet wishes no other way to spend her time in Life. The author gives a spectacular view on the story that has great depth, providing exquisite details making the plot and dependent come to life!"
Smile Baby Smile
"Winifred hasn’t had much happiness in her life. Growing up as an orphan and bullied in both elementary and high school, all she wants to do now is concentrate on her college studies and move on with her life. But Lucas her childhood tormentor won’t have any of that. He follows her around the school campus and always has some smart-ass remark to give her. Why won’t he just leave her alone? Sure, he’s grown up kind of handsome if you liked the lean muscled and lanky blonde hair type. And too, every once in a while she thinks she sees a soft glance from him. Something vulnerable and questioning before he covers it up with the usual smug-arrogance. But surely those yearning glances are just a trick from her imagination. Aren’t they? For starters Moi-Moi is an excellent writer. If it is her goal to become a professional published author, I believe she will successful some day. (If she’s not already.) What I like best about her writing is how she realistically portrays her characters. They are not Mary Sues (a character so perfect that they ruin the plot of the story) but are well-rounded individuals and allowed to have faults. Warning, there are no fantastical, exotic creatures in this story to fall in lust with. But here is a simple love story that us ordinary humans can relate too. "
Don't smile at me
"Personally, I loved reading this book. I gotta hand it to you, it's pizzarrific asf. The plot is okay and the punctuation and all that. This book is totally worth a bunch of good reviews. "
Don't smile at me.
"Awww, this is a very cute short story. And I have no words. It was splendid! Amazing story and I love how you describe people and everything. This story is totally worth your time. I would recommend this story to everyone who like short, romance story. 👍"
Endearing
"This is such a sweet romance. Although I usually gravitate towards more dark and mature romances, this one pulled at my heartstrings. I enjoyed that it was in a duel perspective, and it was so cute with how the characters misinterpreted their feelings for each other, which brought that same feeling when you have a crush on someone but don't know if they will reciprocate the feelings. The writing over all was good. The author will need to proofread in the future to fix some grammatical errors along with quite a few punctuation errors such as missing periods and missing commas. Otherwise, it was a really good read."
Don't Smile At Me
"Don't Smile At Me is about young love (and it's harships?) with a coming-of-age theme to it. You will encounter characters who struggle with insecurity and anxiety, as well as, lost friendship and newly found love. Since there are only 7 chapters online, I am curious how the story and protagonists will evolve. Besides that I would like to point out the author's wonderful talent for describing characters and their surroundings. Furthermore, I thought the very first sentence of the book was superb - it's catchy and the reader wants to know more. Well done so far, and I am looking forward to reading more. Best, M."
Good read
"First off I love your cover. I read this and I absolutely love the attention you bring to social anxiety. I myself suffer from anxiety so I related very well to the character. I love how well written this was and can't wait to see where the author takes this story."
Don't Smoke At Me
"Such a well written story line. I love your plot! Well structured sentences. I only hope to write as well as this one day! Great work"
Don’t Smie At Me
"I honestly loved the story. What drew me most to the story was the title because it is absolutely intriguing. It is what made me start reading the book in the first place. After that, the plot, the characters and the dialogue was just amazing. It was a page turner and I really hope to read more of your work!!"
Captivating
"I am really enjoying the character interaction in this story. That always helps me get more into a book and now that I'm hooked I want more. I will definitely be waiting for the next chapters of this book. Great read so far. "
So far, so good
"Honestly this book is a hook. I added it to my list thinking I’d read it later but after just the first chapter I didn’t want to put it down. I enjoy learned about the character and her rivalry with the attractive jock (who I know we’re supposed to hate but I can’t help but love). I blame the great writing style, making me love characters I’m not supposed to like. A very realistic dialogue that makes you think you’re a part of the conversation. I cannot wait for Wednesday for the update. "
Don't smile at me
"Hi! So I think this story is pretty good. I love the character interactions and how you've given each character a personality of their own while making it obvious to the readers because in most stories I've read, sometimes the writers tend to lose the purpose of other characters while trying to highlight the main character. So hats off to you for that! I adore you language style; it was a natural flow and helped your readers to enjoy the story thoroughly, although there were a changes in tense (but I guess that's okay and not very noticeable unless you read it to find mistakes other than to enjoy the story lol) The plot though, I think could be improved with a sharper conflict but either way, I understand that it may not exactly be your purpose of writing this story so I guess it's okay as long as it's enjoyable for your audience. Amazing work and keep it up!"
Lovely
"It is a short love story.. The characters are vividly described, and it is very easy to get in tune with their emotions. I also think the chapter titles are very well achieved. They show how history is being built like in photographs. I really liked that. What I think can be improved: - Verbs tense: They change all the time, modifying the tense of the main narration from present to past. Only one should be chosen. -The conflict: When you start reading, you think that the conflict is about the past that Winifred and Lucas share. They can't fall in love because he's basically her rival and was her bully at school. However, nothing happens with this. They soon forget it. So, you think that the conflict would be about the Winifred's acceptance by Lucas's family, or the fact that she must travel far away for a long time. But the novel ends and none of that is clarified or resolved. Therefore, it is not clear what the conflict is. Either way, it's an adorable story. And I think it has a lot of potential if the author keeps working on it."
Interesting...
"I like how you started off the story with a little background to let us know the characters better. Your writing style fits perfectly with the structure of the book, great job!! However, I think there should be more action in the plot. Or maybe I haven't gotten there yet. From what I'm up to, it's hard to stay involved with the story if it's just describing the ordinary school life. I'm waiting for some DRAMA XD Buuuut, other than that, I think I would definitely give this story a try and see what it will lead to! And btw, I hate everyone at her school XD But keep up the good work! :D"
Great.
"I loved it personally. Winifried has her own ups and downs. @moimoi_chan your writing style is amazing af. Good luck! Your judge, Annabelle "
I like it
"Okay so it kinda threw me off a little with the writing but after awhile I kinda got a sense of what was happening and I'd rate this a 10/10 for character development. This is good book to sit down and read whenever or wherever "
Loved it
"I love the plot. I did start to get the sense though that maybe you got bored with it or distracted and hurried to finish it? Still great work. :)"
Don't smile at me
"I love how you describe your characters. They seem realistic and it's relatable. The grammar is good and the story keeps its flow. Overall, it's a great plot and I can't wait to read more of it!"
