What is your opinion?
SAVED
"Ugh! I am a sucker for these kinds of stories. This is one of the best crime/ thrillers I have ever read. It also takes a lot to put me on edge but this story got to me! This story is so compelling, I am in love with every character (even if they are supposed to be the bad guy) everything was executed so well. The author is amazing at capturing the moment and really selling the plot. I felt just about every emotion along with beautiful characters in it. the writing style is perfect, and all the elements mix so well together. AMAZING JOB!!!!"
Thrilling!
"I normally don't like scary stories cause I can't really handle that type of stuff, but I read this one and even though it was pretty creepy it was very good and I really enjoyed the writing style! I can't wait to read the next one!"
Saved
"As a sucker for romance this is all new to me. But I really enjoyed reading, I actually read this last month but forgot to write a review because of how head over heels I was. I do like myself some mystery but only when it comes to me watching a YouTube video or Netflix lol, in this case it was different. I found myself saying "one more chapter", but still kept going anyway. I wish you the best of luck and all of my love <3"
Goddamn!
"I'm not happy because I have to wait for a second book! Haha. Wow, intense, gripping, chilling and now it's all up in the air now and just a waiting game for Jil and Mike. You're very good at being chilling in your writing and your twists made me react as such! Never stop what you're doing! I'm so excited for the sequel."
Saved
"This was a bone chilling novel and I lived it! I feel so sorry for the girls that were killed and for James. He really did love Jill. If anyone wants a good suspense then this is the right book for you!"
Saved
"Save me! I'm falling in love with your writing. The grammar and punctuation is to the point, and the thing I liked the most was that it made me keep my interest till the end and the details were explained well! ^-^"
Saved
"From the first chapter till the end this book has been interesting, intriguing with twists and turns. I couldn't stop reading. Well writen with a good plot and interesting characters.Can't wait for book two to see where Jaxon went and what Jil and Mikey are going to do. I found some minor spelling mistakes but other than that it was a really good read that I suggest you drink on its every word."
Full of twists and turns
"Well what an adventure ride this turned out to be. I thoroughly enjoyed the twists and turns in this tale of jealousy and lunacy. There are lots of differing characters to keep track of and plenty of red herrings to keep you guessing along the way. The flashbacks eventually help fill in the blanks and I really enjoyed how the story ended. A satisfying read :)"
Saved made me imagine 🌠✨
"Your story have took my attention from the 1st word I ve read I love the way you write each word you put added to the story suspense the characters everything I'm impatient about the next chapters you ve done such amazing job Kara. Love you❤🤠Rihab"
Saved
"I particularly took interest in this story because mystery is definitely my cup of tea! And I have to say, you didn't disappoint me! I've only read a few of the first chapters but dear readers, you're in for a pretty exciting ride! Your descriptions are up to perfection and I enjoyed it thoroughly as I read along. I love the plot and I can't wait to read more! Beautiful work and wishing you all the best!"
Saved
"I enjoyed it even though I read a couple of chapters. The plot was interesting so it kinda got me going. It felt like it was a dark book, which I like. Somehow it kinda got me imagining of rain and thunder. But there were some (not a lot) grammar mistakes, but from that Loved it, keep going :)"
SAVED
"I love the story plot it's very interesting. I'm so invested in this book that I'm like constantly checking to see if I missed something, haha. I love your writing style, it's very good. Technical skills are on point only a bit off at some parts but it's alright, there's always room for improvement. I love it, great job!!"
Very Interesting Plot, Can't wait for more!
"I am a sucker for dark crime stories and very rarely do I see a well written perspective from the killer. I was completely enthralled with the flashbacks and I find it that helps the reader get insight on what is going on in the killers head instead of just assuming he is completely insane. There is always an interesting perspective, even if it's coming from a serial killer's head! My only suggestion will be to separate the paragraphs and dialogue so it is easier to follow. Other then that everything is fantastic and I'm excited to read more and stay updated. I've added to my library and will be reading closely. Way to go author!"
Enthralling!
"This book was simply spellbinding! It has a reader hooked from the start - and from the beginning, it seems intriguing and mysterious - the kind that will leave you craving to know more! There were minor errors, though, that ruin the flow of the story. I think you should edit it because the sentences are often jumbled up and merged into one huge paragraph instead of multiple ones. I think you can fix that!"
Saved
"I love the story so far and I didn't expect to get the Miller's perspective in the very first chapter. The plot is very interesting and I'm always a sucker for a great crime and mystery book. I can't wait to read more and see just what the author has in store for us! "
Saved
"Amazing grammar. I really like how you explain the girl's background in the beginning and the dark details included. Very intriguing. Your writing style really captures the reader's attention and has them wanting to read more to see what's next."
SAVED
"This book has been an amazing read so far. Although this might just be my personal annoyance, I hate how each paragraph has a line after it is done, It took me away from the story a bit. This story is also only two chapters so I cannot say too much but from what I read it is so good. Will definitely be waiting for new updates."
Saved
"I like how it started and the dark past you added in, it has a interesting start and I can’t wait to see more of it."
Saved
"This story was okay...bits of suspense, mystery and romance. That's for writing. makapueo65"
Good!
"Great plot and characters!! Holy the twists are keeping me on my toes! I need to know what happens next ahhhh. Jil is especially compelling and i cant wait to see what happens next with her character. This may just be aesthetics on my part, but play around with starting a new paragraph every time someone new is talking. In my experience it helps the flow of conversations. Not that yours didnt, but the big blocks of text with dialogue between two characters mixed in was teeny bit confusing at times. Still very well written, just something to play around with if youd like-i leave it up to you :) Let me end it on a positive note: you dont normally get the killers perspective in stories like this, so that was a very fun twist! Even if they were super diabolical lol. Great job keeping up the mystery and intrugue!! Ill keep reading! Great job! :) "
