What is your opinion?
Amazing
"This is my first time writing a review so bear with me. I'm only a chapter in but I love it already. It can be a little over descriptive at times (some may like this however, its probably just me) but other than that you are immersed into the story straight away. Can't wait to read more!"
Interesting, captivating
"Hi Alexia, Can't wait to finish this story! From what I read of it, it is well written (and just saying, I love how the chapters are named after the girls!) Although is a little confusing with seven girls, I'm sure I'll get to know them better throughout the story. Keep writing, can't wait to see where you take this! -Adeila"
A pleasant surprise, with few plot holes
"I read what you had of "Seven Little Queens," and I enjoyed what you have so far! All of your characters seem interesting, and I love the way you're connecting them between chapters. They're so well-rounded, which a lot of Inkitt authors never seem to get right. The world building is exciting, and definitely has potential. There are a few nitpicks I have with this, however: 1) Parentheses in narratives. This is personally one of my greatest pet peeves in writing. If you feel the need to put information in parentheses, chances are, it's not needed. If it's actually important, use commas or dashes instead. Otherwise, it messes with the flow of the narration and looks unprofessional. There are a few minor grammar errors as well, but mostly, your grammar itself is pretty good. 2) This isn't much of a problem, but a lot of the kingdom names are long and clunky, and it hurt my brain trying to read through them all. Maybe opt for some shorter ones that are easier to pronounce? 3) The technology. At first, it seemed like a Medieval-type high fantasy, though the use of phones confused me since it seemed so out of place. They use carriages and they have magic; why do they need phones? A world with both magic and technology seems interesting, so I hope you'll do something with this idea. Otherwise, this is a great story so far, and I'm excited to see where it goes! I don't read a lot of good fantasy on Inkitt, but this one is certainly going places! Keep it up! -E.S. Paul"
Great start to a gripping story
"The novel is gripping from the start. The character introductions and development is good. I didn't see any grammar or punctuation errors and the plot is progressing well. It is a good read overall but I think that the chapters should be more descriptive."
Amazing piece
"Your story has great potential. This could expand to become something really intense. I've just read the first chapter and I love it. Your character introduction are great. Keep it up."
Seven Little Queens
"This story is truly amazing. The characters are so aptly described that I feel like I know them after only reading a few sentences. There were a few random typos, but the punctuation was very well done. For example, in chapter 3 you wrote "on punished Kat" instead of "on punishing Kat.", and "the loved Kat" instead of "they loved Kat." Besides this, it was truly wonderful. The plot is engaging and really exciting, and I can't wait to know what happens next."
Great
"I have only read one chapter, and I already have a feel for all of the characters introduced. I was confused with the different realm names but, I think I got it now! You have a very defined style 9in a good way). I cant pick up any faults. Now, excuse me I'm going to read the next chapters!"
Love it!!!
"Although I absolutely love the plot of this book, I must say that my favorite aspect of the story has to be the fact that the characters are defined so quickly! I really get a sense of who Amber is within the first chapter and I must say, her sass is everything to me. I really enjoy this book and I encourage everyone to read it!"
Seven little queens
"At the start, I was really intrigued and read it without a pause. The plot and the names of the kingdom were well created and the characters are lined up uniquely. I really admire your writing style and the chapters were well written. Keep writing. And sorry for the delay."
Attention grabbing
"It reminds me of a book I once read but can no longer remember the title. Really attention grabbing, I enjoyed it very much and would honestly read it again."
Intriguing
"It's very intriguing story and I love how you picked up the 7 princess' names, they were so out-worldly. Love the connection you write among the sisters and it got me hooked though I was a bit confused with the setting when amber stated the mall... where do they live since I read about Rowan worry about his mother travel about the war and etc... Hence overall, love the story and can't wait to read the rest of the story...."
Seven Little Queens
"I haven't read very far into this story yet, but so far, I am really liking it. It has me intrigued, and I'm looking forward to reading on. 😊 You have a very engaging style of writing."
Very Good
"So this book is interesting. When the sisters meet eachother for the first time it's kinda out of a Disney movie. The writing style was very captivating as the story progresses. I felt that the characters needed a bit of flushing out, like at some times they sounded very one dimensional to me. But there are a lot of aspects that the writer can use to further enrich the characters. The world buliding was confusing at times. I didn't know whether the story was set in modern or old times, and I wanted to know more about the kingdoms. But overall, this book has a lot of potential and it's really good. "
So cool!
"I really enjoyed reading this! The only thing I would recommend is developing your characters more before going too much further into the book and adding some more imagery. I really like how the book has the different perspectives and I think it works really well for your book. Your style is nice and so far, it's easy to follow! Keep up the good work!"
A Great Start
"This was a very quick read for me, and I think it is a great start to the full story. The set up seems interesting, but not so predictable that I don't wonder what will happen next. I didn't really find any issues with grammar and I'm excited to read the rest of the book."
chapter one
"well written, sounds interesting and that I might want to read further."
