What is your opinion?
Not bad
"Well written. Interesting plot. An easy read. Nice job! "
AWESOME
"This book is such amazing I want to thank you this author of having such a talent I fall in love with this story and I will always support you (the author) 🔥🔥😊😊😊💓💓💓"
Love it!
"Interesting plot! Keep it up💜"
Brilliant
"This Book is brilliant! I love every about it. There was new things happening throughout the story that all have you guessing what’s next. Lots of unexpected things I didn’t see coming and were eventually explained. I believe there’s more and I cannot wait! Just need to edit some, but that’s the only issue! Well Done author!"
Amazing story!
"I'm not usually into stories like this, and I've only gotten to the third chapter, but I'm already in love with this story! The author has a beautiful writing style and it shows that he planned the plot and the world with love and passion! I'll definitely continue reading this as soon as I can! "
I want to live in this world!
"I love this story so far. I want to be James and be sucked into a world of intrigue. Your style is intense and very resolved. You write with conviction, more than many professional authors. This is brilliant. Cannot wait to continue reading."
Very Good
"I would recommend this book to people who love a good paced book where a lot of information is not given all at once but your given enough to want to keep reading"
Bizarre
"A very different and intriguing work. I have only one problem cause it’s driving me fucking insane. Why the hell would his x send a letter apologizing for things he had no idea she did when she then required his help. Clearly she had his address she mailed him a letter. Also he could have called the brother. Just seems all very out of his way for answers on something that happened ten years ago. Also I need to know why a thirty plus year old man is not only living at home but why he is so child like. I needs the whys please. Lol"
Really Good so far!
"I think this story is off to a great start! I love all the little details thrown in! I like this plot so far as well it is keeping my attention drawn in. Great start and I can't wait for more updates!"
Intriguing!
"Read the two chapters published by the author and can't wait to read the rest. The plot is intriguing, detailed, to an extent that at times it feels like I am watching the characters move and speak. I will definitely recommend this book to my friends who love sci-fi literature. I hope the author gets the recognition he deserves."
Just Good...
"The book was well-planned and I admire how the author could add twists and turns in the story, it showed how much he knew he owned the book and could turn it into whatever he liked. I might have very little experience with book reviewing but I must comment that it's a good book overall. He's definitely gifted. There were very little grammatical errors. Keep up the good work! "
Llewllyn
"This is an amazing story! The plot had so many twists, it was hard to keep up! The story was a little rushed, but the urgency in some chapters added to the atmosphere. I would have loved to see a little more development in more characters. For me, the only one who changed was really Emily, and I think it was more how I viewed her as a reader changed. Maybe James could be a little less clueless and repetitive. For me, James' character was really under-developed, and not much was mentioned about him. He's a 30 year old still living with his parents, and really doesn't pick up on things. Also, maybe try to give a perspective of one of the trio. I also noticed maybe some of your grammatical errors, there weren't very many, but it was noticed. Also, some periods on the end of sentences and making the paragraphs a little less blocky would really make your story look more structured. But, overall, this book, this world that you've created is amazing. I think you have a more driven writing style than a lot of professionals. It was a great read. -Arjinrose"
Llewellyn
"The first chapter was nice and polished. The author writes good scenes but needs more character development. Let’s if interesting characters but more unfolding of who they are would be great. I like the storyline and plot and am enjoying the book so far. "
Really interesting story!
"I've read the first 6 chapters and thought it was a interesting story and would like to see what will happen in the end. But one thing that's bothering me though is the is setting. It is set in modern times in the year 2052 and it's in the Sci-fi genre and I didn't see much modern stuff except a few androids, if the story set in modern time would they still use cellphone's, cd's, Suv's ?wouldn't there be some high tech stuff? But I do like the plot of the story and I'm looking forward to see where it will lead."
Intriguing
"Something completely new and fresh! "
Awesome drama
"Overall the story is captivating, and I was quite tuned into Chapter three's drama. The only minor problem this story has is the lack of commas or "periods". Like during dialogues: "Hi{,]" she said or "Bye[.]". There isn't the constant use of it in the dialogues. Other than that, it's only been five chapters, but I would recommend it to sci-fi fanatics. Keep on writing, fellow author."
Great Start!
"From what I've read so far, this story has started on an amazing start. The author includes great detail, while also not including too much. Great dialogue and an interesting main character. The start has a great plot introduced and I can't wait to see where that leads the main character. Great job author!"
