What is your opinion?
Interesting premise and good characters
"I found this a fun ride. The story is split into two stories, One occurs in a not-so-distant past that leads to the present situation. Both stories tie in perfectly, and that takes some skill. There are a few minute grammatical errors, and the story would benefit from a good editor, however, without spoilers, I can tell you that the premise is excellent and very engaging."
Love the dynamics
"It held my interest! It's all about the supernatural and spirits and I like such stuff but that's not all....it has really cute emotional dynamics, weaving in the heavy with the light. I like that. The writing style confused me a bit in the beginning but I caught it early on and it was smooth sailing after that. I say the story has great potential. Great job!"
WOW, WOW, WOW!!!
"You probably know from my comments, but this was amazing! I can’t wait until you upload more chapters, I’m absolutely hooked. There are several grammar mistakes but if you want my help with that then just let me know! 😍😃"
The Dutch's Bottle
"I loved the story, the writing style is great, it gives suspense when reading it. There could be some descriptive words thrown in, to give the reader more eerie feeling, but I read all the chapters, and the story has great potential, let's see where it goes. Good job."
The Dutch's Bottle
"Your story, Sandy, makes an interesting read. Because of the clarity you have in explaining the sequences, a reader can picture them in their mind vividly. There is suspense and associated drama. The dialogues are well-written so each character comes across as unique. I think it has great potential so keep writing. Best wishes, shobana"
I’m loving this book so far!
"I’m really excited to see where this book goes! It has so much potential and I like how you go back and forth between two different sides of the story. It’s very unique. Keep up the fantastic work! "
The Dutch’s Bottle
"For now, I read first 6 chapters and I must say, I like it so far. Nice writing style which allows perfect visualization for the reader :) Also, plot is great, gave me good vibes :) I don’t like horror stories but this one is great and thrilling:) nice work done ✔️ "
My review
"Very good story. I have read it in one breath. When reading it, I also imagined possible scenes from a movie."
The Dutch's Bottle
"Good storyline. The writing style is unbelievable, but I kind of like it. Character development and the story structure were impressive and the suspense just stirs. Fantastic effort."
something terrorsomething terror
"you have a good tact of writing"
The Dutch's Bottle
"Amazing. The plot and story line are simply brilliant. I was addicted to it."
Amazing
"Wow really great writing style, I love the plot of this book! Nicely done."
Intense as F#*k
"One moment the book can be calm and sad to intense to crippling depression. The last chapter (which was chapter 7 when I read this story) was just filled with sadness and intensity. I was genuinely worried about the main characters while I was reading this story. The author has a way of making you feel what the characters or feeling and allowing you to peek into their world. It was an amazing read."
An amazing story that will draw you in!
"A great story which will develop into something great from the looks of it. I was immediately hooked in after reading the blurb and diving into the first few chapters. Super detailed descriptions which helped me sink into the story and truly fall into the moment and what these characters were going through. The only suggestion I have for further improving this great story is to take a look at dialogue tags and action beats! Although the writing style is very vivid and detailed oriented, I noticed in some areas of dialogue that gestures, movements, and/or facial expressions are missing within sections to add to the flow of things. You could do a quick research on how to use action beats properly before, between, and/or after a character is speaking to help enrich your character’s voices. Keep in mind these tags and beats act as rhythm moderators. Again, your writing style is beautiful and executed just as so! I was absolutely enthralled with this thrilling story and found myself flipping page after page. The characters were realistic and deep, very easy to get a feel of who they are as an individual. The damn situations had my heart in my throat too haha the moments of suspense with every beat, my god, I was hooked!! Great work and keep it up! Please don’t ever feel discouraged, you’re doing amazing 🖤"
Interesting!
"Maybe because I don't read horror books a lot, this one was quite refreshing for me and dragged me right into the plot. I enjoyed this piece of story quite a bit though there are a few grammatical errors and mistakes but I guess it can be improvised with edits down the road. The writing style is good too alternating between the h and a story telling. I look forward to the updates and I will be editing my review according to it. Good job author, keep rolling! "
Interesting plot
"I haven't read any book like this on inkitt though I'll appreciate if you complete it 👍🏽"
Very interesting plot so far. Keep up the good work!
"I am waiting for the updates. "
Fascinating!!!!
"I love the first chapter. It pulls you in immediately you start reading , can't wait to read more"
Splendid!!!!
"Your first chapter was amazing. Summary was very spooky. L♡VED IT! Look forward to reading more."
Very Promising
"A very good beginning. Quite promising and captivating."
