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The Bucket List

"Quite the way to introduce a love story. The writer captured the idea of a fake relationship turning into a real relationship. The romance is definitely intriguing."

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The Bucket List

"The book has a fantastic start, Jenifer is dying, which for some people can cause a reckless streak as seen with your main character. They're going to die anyway so F it, they might as well enjoy themselves. Your main character is really realistic, her feelings when she finds out she's going to die, her determination to try and do something with her life. Keep up the great work, Sofia"

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The plot is amazing!

"I love the plot of the story overall. I read the first chapter and I can tell that I'm gonna be hooked!"

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Bucket List

"I really enjoyed the story. Simply put. There are ranges of emotions everywhere that's probably understandable considering Jen's situation; pain, sadness, frustration and more heaped within. The characters are well rounded and put together and the loving sibling relationship between Jen and her brother is really sweet considering every difference they had. Some sentences felt stilted and a few grammatical errors here and there and needs a runover. Other than that, I enjoyed it and I look forward to reading to the end Don't stop writing. :D"

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The Bucket List

"Quite an interesting read, and sorry that I took a lot of time in doing this review swap because I was dealing a lot of issues along with my studies. I hope you understand it. The storyline is very catchy, good plot and an interesting character development. Good work!"

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Bucket list

"The author does have a very good story in her mind. Her brother is so sweet. He manages his love life, rich son life and a perfect sibling life with out hurting anyone else."

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Great novel

"It's a great book. I'm in so love with this book. The writing style is unique. The plot is interesting. and Jennifer is a great inspiration for us.💕"

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The Bucket List

"I loved how fast paced it is."

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All in the Bucket.

"Jenifer, an attractive young woman has always tried to inspire hope in others. After surviving an emotionally abusive family that values money above all else, she promises herself to never let those warped values change her into someone she can’t respect. But when cancer invades her body, forcing her to realize how short and precious life really is, Jenifer is forced to come to a decision. Does she feed her long resentments towards her uncaring mother and extract revenge? Or does she try to inspire hope in her younger brother, just one more time? A very sentimental novel that aims to tug the heart strings and I admit with me has somewhat succeeded. The first chapter was the best in my opinion and my favorite. There we learn about Jenifer’s difficult past and how her half brother managed to live a more privileged life then she did. But this doesn’t destroy the love between the two siblings. Nicely done. I did note some grammar errors, but none that ruined the flow of the story. This novel certainly spoke to me and reminded me of the power of love and forgiveness. "

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Breezy

"The plot can be called repetitive, BUT, I am the BIGGEST fan of death related stories. I really liked this. The grammar has few mistakes, but I think that's absolutely OK. The plot is good. I liked the writing style. It's a good book if you liked the fault in our stars or five feet apart. "

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The Bucket List

"You did a great job! I really liked your main character. She was totally believable. It's sad to think about but we could all, one day, be in her position. Life is so short. You really made me think on this one. Keep up the good work!"

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The Bucket List

"I love the idea for the book. The concept of limited time is something we don't think enough about until it's too late. The characters are so realistic and relatable. It is obvious that the author writes with a lot of passion and love. Other than a few grammar mistakes, I really enjoyed the book so far. Keep up the good work!"

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Intriguing

"So recently I watched a bit of Five Feet Apart and I was like, oh, cool. I need to read the book. So I found it online and started it but was disappointed because I can't get time to finish it with Inkitt and Wattpad accounts to manage and lack of time I get on the Internet. But when I saw the plot of this book, I decided I had to read it. Fortunately, it was NOT a disappointment. I admire how all the emotions are depicted in the story, and how the first chapter catches your attention with its vivid passion. Minor errors distracted me from the story line in several places, but I'm sure proofreading would help fix it. Keep writing! <33"

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Potential!

"I think this story has a lot of potential! I like the concept and how you fit the various characters into your narrative and plot. You clearly have a strong idea and I can't wait to see where it goes from here! I found the characters believable and realistic, which is hard to do, so good job with that. I think going back and really working on grammar and formatting will really take your book to the next level. The main thing I noticed was your tenses. But your structure was pretty good, starting a new paragraph each time someone is talking is the way to go and it helped your conversations flow well. Overall the foundations are here for something really special! I love your characters and I'm excited to see where things go from here - great job! :)"

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Awesome!

"I love the concept! Limited time is something many people think about but we forget to enjoy the moments we have quite often. The grammar issue is that you switch from present to past tense so it’s a bit confusing when you read, but I love the plot! First person also means you have to be more descriptive but so far I think you’re doing awesome <3"

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A good beginning

"It's challenging to review something in such an early stage, but what is not in any way rough or uncertain is the author's passion. I hope she will continue writing!!"

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