What is your opinion?
Really good!
"I really enjoyed reading Partners in Arson! I think you did an amazing job capturing the reader! You do have a few grammer errors, but that's okay! I can't wait for the next chapter to come out!"
Partners in arson
"Really good story! The only thing that's wrong with it is you don't always use proper grammar and you use a few wrong words, you might try reading through you story and editing. Over all Really good! I don't want to spoil anything but, very emotionally griping. I mean I almost cried ."
Beautiful Characters and Great Potential
"Partners in Arson was a great read for me. I think the concept is creative and compelling and I look forward to seeing how the plot develops! I think the strongest element of this story is the characters. It might take a bit to get to know them, but as the book progresses, the author is able to draw you in and become invested in their stories as individuals. The only thing I would say that might improve the story is to add more "meat" to it. It would be nice to see a little more character development and world building. For the most part, the only significant interaction we see with the main characters is with each other. It would be interesting to see how they interact with their peers or family members to help us get a better feel for the world and how the supporting characters affect the protagonists as well as giving the story a more three dimensional feel to it. Overall, worth the read!"
Partners In Arson
"An excellent start to the story! I appreciate the succinctness of the chapters, as it greatly increases the flow of the writing! I also appreciate how clearly conveyed the character's emotions are portrayed without the need for overcomplications. Regarding the characters, Ethan is most definitely my favorite because of his attractive attitude, despite how, initially, most everyone saw him as suspicious. Lastly, in terms of the technicality of your writing, I recommend revising your chapters once more to ensure there aren't any erroneous words and whatnot. Overall, this is a delightfully quick and intriguing read!"
PARTNERS IN ARSON
"I really loved the story. First of all I really liked the way the writer has portrayed the nature of the characters. Then I would come to the plot which is very intriguing. (SPOILER ALERT: I really wanna know what happened to Ethan's parents and what will happen to his sister) Then as for Amelia.... I really loved how cute she was. Means I could imagine how her reaction would be with her every dialogue. The attachment between Ethan and his sister was very sweet too. And I.... just really loved the story a lot and will be looking forward for the updates. ^_^"
Nice Story
"I very much enjoyed your story, the chapters was short and snappy to keep my attention. I loved the characters of Ethan and Amelia . I could really feel the pain that they are going through and the awkwardness between them. I look forward to reading so more of your work."
Partners In Arson
"It’s a nice read, short and sweet. I loved the story plot of the story, excited to see what the title means within the story. Some grammar and spelling errors, but it was great overall. Overall I will be sure following to see what happens!! :) "
Partners In Arson
"I very much enjoy this author's writing style. It's very nice to read something new every once in a while and this is a very nice story. The plot itself is amazing and technical skills on point only one or two parts missed here and there but other than that, very well written. I also love the characters, the attitudes and personalities are also very well written, great job! I recommend this story to anyone that wants a light read, it won't take very long to read. It's a nice change from fantasy and sci-fi. Once more to the author, very very well done."
Partners in Arson
"It's nice to read out of my normal genre once in awhile, which is usually fantasy, and I'm really enjoying this story so far. I'm all caught up now, and this story has left me with some serious questions, but I'm sure all the questions will be answered as the story progresses. One question, however, that's really nagging at me, is why does Ethan always leave his baby sister home alone? And where are the parents? I went over the chapters a few times to see if I missed anything, but I don't think I did. My conclusion is we simply don't know yet at this point in the story. As for Amelia, the other main character, she's very lonely, but perhaps not as lonely as you might think, and she seems to enjoy the benefits of being an only child. It's also pretty clear that Ethan likes her, but because of his reputation, Amelia doesn't know how to react to him yet. Great story so far! I love when there's a bit of a mystery going on, and both characters are very believable, well written, with distinct personalities. I definitely recommend this story, and I'll keep an eye out for the updates."
Partners in Arson
"Appears a good story and I liked Ellie and Ethan. The plot seems to be great and enjoyable though Romance is not my choice. Keep on with yr good job and all the best."
Quite interesting!!
"So first of all, I really love the plot of your book. It is quite interesting, especially knowing the real reason behind why Amelia doesn't want to have friends. There are also scenario that made me laugh, specifically when Ethan took care of her younger sister alone. It is very realistic. Overall, I like your story. Please keep up the good work!"
Partners in Arson
"I've read what already been posted, and I've got to say it's fantastic! I've done a lot of reviews on here, and a lot of them have grammar mistakes, or plot holes, or are just difficult to read in general, but I don't have this problem here. The plot is intriguing, the dual point of view, and alternating between chapter is very well carried out, and there is an air of mystery. Why did Ethan go to prison? Why does Amelia not want any friends? And where in the world are Ethan and Ellie's parents?? As well as all this, I found the book refreshing, because the book is clearly written by a British author, as they use Mum and maths, as well as several other things. I have no problem's with American's or American works, I've spent a lot of time in the states, but as I'm English myself I do sometimes find it slightly jarring to read math instead of maths and so on. Keep up the fantastic work, Sofia"
partners in arson
"Hello, I love the way you capture interest from the start and make me want to read on. I gave you a 4 stars for grammar because nobody gets it perfectly right (including me) and if there are any mistakes I missed them. :) Back to the book. Loving it so far, you are managing to keep the mystery ongoing..Looking forward to the rest. I am still feeling a bad outcome to the story, something nasty lurking around the corner, Hiding the truth to why this child is not with her parents.Keep writing. Another delightful chapter.... keep going it is intriguing. There are a few grammatical errors , you can do a quick edit for that. It is time to give us more now.We are all anxiously waiting :). I just added a new story, maybe you could take a peek , please. Title : The Upside of Parkinson's."
Partners in Love
"Ellie is not necessarily looking for love in her young life. She has no time for friendships let alone romantic entanglements. Her goals are to get good grades and then graduate from school. But Bad Boy Ethan simply refuses to leave her alone. “He’s a stalker,” she tells herself. She knows his tainted reputation, all the detentions he receives. How can he hope to form a romance with her when they are such complete opposites. Ellie believes the entire idea is hopeless. But when she looks into Ethan’s eyes and sees the caring, sensitive souls beneath the tough boy exterior, she begins to wonder if there might be room in her life for love after all. This was a sweet romance tale filled with lots of heart melting moments. Like when Ethan tenderly cares for his infant sister. (Those were my favorite scenes.) Ethan, interesting enough, starts out as the typical detention riddled bad boy but then morphs into a sensitive and caring individual. It was a fun transformation. As a matter of fact I’m not sure where the ‘Arson’ is from the title. I haven’t encountered any fires yet, other then the fiery love the two leads have for each other. Though it’s possible this might be coming up in future chapters. This was an enjoyable about a sweet romance. It’s sure to put a smile on your face. "
Partners in Arson
"This is pretty intriguing so far!! I relate so much to both main characters, lol. The chapters are very short so it makes for really light, quick reading, and leaves you coming back for more. The author's writing style flows easily between POV's, so it's not hard to keep track of what you're reading, either. Additionally, it's in first person POV. I'd forgotten how fun it is to read first person! With regards to plot, I'm so excited to see where this story takes us. I'm definitely adding this to my library because I can't wait to see what happens! Kudos to you on a job well done, Author."
Partners in arson
"Just like last time, Teah has worked her magic here. The chapters are small and catchy. I. Just. Freaking. Love. It!"
Partners in arson
"I enjoyed reading this story so far. The chapters are short and interesting and it helped keep my attention. I was initially confused around Ethans role for his sister but as the story progressed it all became more obvious so it definitely kept me reading to find out where it was going! I thought it flowed well and the writing style was great. Looking forward to keeping up with the next chapters! "
Partners in arson
"I really like the plot! I feel so sorry for Ethan and Ellie! What bad parents! The flashback was a little confusing but everything else was great. Well done."
Partners in arson
"I really like it, but would be more happy if there was something more to it. Like some other plot rather than just Elli. Yeah and maybe something more about her parents too. As for Amelia, her character just didn't really intrigued me. She was just like any other introvert and kept her distance at all time. The overall story was a great read. U would recommend it to my friends. 😊"
