What is your opinion?
Amazing job
"I couldn't stop reading it, you did a beautiful job. I love your descriptive writing, and the style of it. You may need to work on punctuation though, but nobody's perfect. Your plot line was clear, but still had me asking the question that needs to be asked: "what happens next?""
Salma
"I don’t usually read action based books however yours is amazing and i love how you used a lot of description. Keep up the good work!"
I'm ready for more!
"Upbeat! Nice pace! Very nice first few chapters and interesting main character. Please keep writing more"
Brilliant Work
"Infonation has an incredible story to tell and he (she) has started nicely. I especially love the writing style, the way the narration is done. He has everything set for creating one of the greatest fantasies ever written. Good job, Infonation. Update quickly so as not to lose your readers' interest."
Powerful Blurb
"I felt a motivational voice in the prologue that kept me reading the first chapter. I like that style, I don't see it so much from other writers. Good Work."
Gripping Teaser
"Great start. I like the tone and subject of the story. Very intriguing. The revolution reminds me of an old cartoon I watched called Exosquad. The only thing I would change calling this a Prologue instead of a chapter as it sets the story for the reader. There are some minor grammar mistakes, but not too noticeable. Keep it up, looking forward to reading more. "
Whoa!
"It's amazing, very unique and pulled me in instantly. Really can't wait to read more!"
Revolution
"I'm really looking forward to what comes next. Great setup."
Awesome!
"Pulled me in right away. I love it !! Cant wait to see more ! "
wow
"I'm real impressed. I think this is better than all my stories combine"
Still developing
"I don't usually like to write reviews so early on in stories because the plot and characters are still developing. As of right now, the story is well written. Like all stories, it can use some polishing, but I'm sure that will come later. The plot, as of now, feels like the average teen dystopian novel. Nothing really stands out about it to me, but again, there're only a few chapters so anything can happen. I haven't seen enough of the characters to have an opinion on them really. The main character Elle is the tough girl survivalist with a reluctant soft side. There isn't a whole lot to say about her traveling companion as of yet. Overall, it seems like a fun read, but there isn't anything that makes it stand apart from the other books in its genre."
Gets better as it goes along
"I’ll be honest, when I first started reading this book I didn’t think I was going to like it. The heroine seemed like she was going to turn into your everyday dystopian Mary Sue. I was pleasantly surprised when you decided to focus on her weaknesses instead, making her a much more rounded character with the conflict that she wanted and failed to be heartless. The interactions between characters are also very good and the plot so far is intriguing, but could do with more description (though not so much that it gets purple-prose-infested). Anyway, the point is that I did end up liking it even though dystopia isn’t usually my thing, so thanks for the read."
Fast-paced and packed with action
"Love the thorough descriptions and the cool action scenes! The plot and background are also interesting enough to constantly keep you on your toes. The story itself is a bit fast-paced, but other than that and a few minor grammar mistakes, it's perfect!"
Different and captivating.
"This is a really good and different plot. Thsi may not be something I usually read but is very captivating and interesting. I like the direction where this story is going, however descriptions at certain points about scenarios, situations as well as people would help and make the story even more captivating, the grammar is something that could be corrected. A Bit of backstory about the life of the main character would also help to get a bit more attached to the story...but all in all this story has great potential. "
Great potential
"I'll start off with saying this story has a lot of potential but needs some work. You've got a lot of grammar mistakes. Commas in the wrong areas, sentence fragments. All of those things are easy to fix when you go back to edit. So that's not a big deal. The one thing I noticed the most as it was a lot of all talk and no descriptions. It was hard to kinda figure out what was happening. example when she's in the store you just say that all the clothes were gone and she only found a bandanna. Why weren't there any clothes? What did the inside of the store look like? Etc. When she went to the apartment she woke up and cried. It seemed out of the blue. What was she feeling? Why was she feeling that way? It would be good to set up her emotions in the first half of the chapter and then when she wakes up add more emotion before she breaks down. Like I said there's a lot of potential and I think it can get there. Just slow things down, explain things more, add more detail. :) "
Great potential!
"First off, Ruelle is the coolest name ever and I wish it were mine. Just had to get that off my chest. Haha! Second, your word choices and descriptions are lovely. A little overdone at times (beware of using too many fancy words just to sound nice, sometimes less is more) but lovely all the same. You paint a vivid picture. Third, the ideas (alien invasion, scientists' daughter, fight for justice!) are EPIC and they form an amazing foundation for this book. That being said, I feel I should explain why I removed points: 1) Too much telling, not enough showing. 2) Commas in places they don't belong, as well as other punctuation errors. 3) Dialogue was forced and unnatural. (I try reading mine aloud to see if it would work in a real life conversation. Helps a lot!) Keep up the good work!"
Revolution
"This story as great potential, it's not something I would usually read but the blurb and prologue were quite intriguing. I think that Chapter 1 and 2 are missing something though, perhaps add some small breadcrumbs of Ruelle's backstory to help understand her actions and emotions a little better. Also, be careful of your grammar and pacing, they are both a little off but should be easy enough to fix. Keep it up!"
Good work!
"I really enjoyed the ideas behind your story. However, the pacing was a bit off and I feel as though you could combine Chapter 1 and 2 to make one chapter. Watch out for your commas, spellings, and grammar. Nicely done and I hope that you post again soon!"
REVOLUTION
"You're doing a great job, so far. Keep up the good work. Will be waiting for more "
Cup of tea.
"This isn’t really my cup of tea but I like it. Normally I’m not drawn by theses stories but this one has caught my eyes. "
