What is your opinion?
This got me interested
"If you are one that like to read creepy stuff like I do. This is the book for you! It was funny to! I loved the main characters, all his thoughts make this feel so real!"
Pissy Chrissy
"I thought the book was very good! There were a few tiny grammatical errors, nothing big that affected the reading though. The humor is there, it’s a good mix between dark story writing and humor. You get the serious dark angst of the story while having the humor there the lighten things up once in a while all while not being too distracting. I thought Chris was a very interesting story. He has his convictions despite being a very vain man, which in general is a recipe for good character writing. His backstory is detailed as well, love the pissy chrissy part. I’m not too big on vampire related books, but I thought the plot was unique. The writing that goes hand in hand with the plot is charming as well."
Vampire Baby - need I add more?
"(ongoing, read til the end of chapter six) I do love a good horror/thriller, but I can't say I've seen many horror/humour stories about - or, at least, none that have managed to pull it off; but this story certainly did just that! It was humourous without being humourous - it wasn't slapstick or forced jokes, there was just something distinctly entertaining about the writing style that had me snorting (at likely highly inappropriate times). The writer also did a great job of building up suspense and tension throughout; Chris' declining mental state was portrayed realistically (well, how I'd imagine one would react to being stuck in a sewer with a vampire baby for the foreseeable future) and I like that the writer didn't shy away from the gory side of things - tis a horror, after all. Anyhoo, really good job with this, can't wait for more! :)"
Mommy's Lil Angel
"I don't know where to start, but I've gotta say you did a great job in creating a story that is a mix of both horror and humor. It's rare to see both these aspects balanced in a story, and the way you shift from narrating old memories to narrating what's happening in the present time doesn't get the reader confused at all. Although horror is not my favorite genre, I should be honest with you and say that the story got me hooked. It started in an entirely bizarre setting (who starts a story in an underground sewer?) and that generated a lot of questions and made me want to continue reading. I felt sorry for Chris after reading his backstory and Julian freaked me out, it is a creative move to use the most adorable creatures on earth to be the villains. The reason I put three stars for grammar and punctuation is because you have a small punctuation problem that can be solved by rereading your chapters before submitting. I recommend your story for anyone who likes horror with a bit of humor and unexpected twists. Nice work!!"
You had me at pissy chrissy!
"A perfect potion of all the things needed for an epic adventure. Creepy baby ✔ Humor ✔ Perfectly written so much so I was finding my stomach turn on some details of that scab...humor that I lost it at pissy chrissy! Relateable characters! The text that was a great little touch! I don't want to give away to much!"
Amazing
"I was stunned by this amazing work of art. It was unique and different, it what I was expecting at all. The writer did an amazing job painting such a diverse and thrilling story. I enjoyed it to the maximum. "
Amazing!
"I absolutely loved and enjoyed this story. I love horror and thrillers and this book was simply perfect. I have no complaints about this story at all. I genuinely enjoyed it and can't wait for the next update. The pace is perfect the story is written in a way that it plays with you're emotions and it was maddening how every chapter ended in a cliffhanger making you want more. I simply couldn't get enough of this story and am now impatiently awaiting the next chapter. Awesome job Chere!! Can't wait to read more from you!"
Mommy's Lil Angel
"This was so different from what I was expecting. I really loved that it was both creepy but also funny. The comedic relief was really great. I like the suspense and the way the plot is revealed so nothing is given away too early!"
Mommy's Lil' Angel
"Mind-blowing, fantastic..... I'm like a big fat horror fan and this is surely my thing. The grammar was fine, plot is good but you might need to cut the long paragraphs into less bigger because it's making it hard for me to read. The detailing of the story is cool and I loved that. The protagonist Chris is really struggling and this story is really a suspense-thriller. An dalal long chapters aren't my thing but I don't mind as long as the story is interesting. So that's that. Well done👍🏻"
Great Story!
"The build up of this book is so intriguing! The author’s writing style is beautiful and the book builds up so much suspense! Looking forward to more chapters! "
momma's lil' angel
"hi. i am not into horror but I will try to be unbiased. Original as a story and plot.Well written. Even if I don't like horror I was glued to keep reading until I was too spooked out to carry on...sorry, my problem not yours. Well done. am sure horror lovers will rate it highly, it deserves it."
Mommys lil angel
"I found it interesting that a baby, is the attacker, the guy, i could tell was genuinely, terrified. I dont know what i would do, if i was in that situation. "
Great read
"The plot was great and I loved the humor in it even though its horror. "
Mommy's Lil Angel
"This is such an intense novel so far, as we watch Chris, the main character, struggle to escape from a monster baby—yes, a vicious, flesh biting baby named Julian. I'm all caught up with the story now, having read all four chapters, and I don't want to give out any spoilers. But I highly recommend this book to horror and fantasy fans, or anyone really. I really enjoyed the vivid descriptions of the dark and dreary sewer, and the physical and mental effect it's having on Chris. He keeps having crazy nightmares, only to wake up to the real nightmare he's already in. So much to talk about, but like I said, I don't want to give out any spoilers. Just read it and you'll see what I mean."
Love it!
"The plot is amazing, it's well written. Every chapter is extremely intriguing and holds a lot of rich descriptions, so it's like I am right there watching everything unfold in front of me. I have to say though, maybe change the structure of your format, allow more breaks in paragraphs as it will ensure more reader retention, otherwise, having larger paragraphs can sway attentions. However, this is just a suggestion, you do whatever works best for you! Otherwise, I think everything is well written, the style is great! Well done, it's an amazing book :)"
Great Work
"I really enjoy your story though I am still not finish reading yet. And honestly, I am not quite fond of horror. I could feel how creepy the child when he kept crawling to Julian. Your writing is also amazing. You perfectly describe every details in the whole scenario. Keep the good work.!"
5/5 ✨
"Oh wow, this was such an amazing read. This is the type of horror that'll keep people up at night (if only it were finished!). I couldn't tell you the plot of this story even if you stuck me inside the sewer thing with the evil baby. But, I can tell you how vividly I pictured the author's words. Seriously good work!!"
Mommy's Lil Angel
"Gosh, I got goosebumps just reading this story. Your ability to craft horror and suspense is incredible. Everything about this is well done. The way you wove in Chris's backstory and even the irony of Chris's childhood compared to him currently being a surrogate parent of sorts. The action is gripping and enticing paired with the hinted mystery in each chapter of your story so far. There were a few errors, but nothing too distracting. You've got such a talent as a horror author, and as an author in general. Keep writing!"
The seems adorable.
"Sorry guys but i will have to break it to you. I am big baby lover. Whether evl or good i am in. "
So Clever
"What a brilliant idea. I love Vampires, but I never gave much thought of what a Vampire baby would be like, and this author did an amazing job with wrestling with that idea. Dare I say, that baby may be creepy to others, but I think he's cute as hell. Also, the writing is very well done. Chris's character is already so well developed, and the dream in chapter two was SO WELL DONE! There were run on sentences because of missing commas where they were needed before the conjunctions, but it was not at all distracting. With proofreading, it is very easy to fix. The idea and the story is brilliant and definitely deserves a spot in the horror genre. I look forward to read what happens next. I'm still not sure why they are stuck in a sewer, so I'm very intrigued! Keep up the good work!"
