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I love this book!

"There’s something about SRR, their book flows and it sounds like butter, I loved everything about this short book🪐the anger, the man who was sat listening to rock, the scenery. It’s so clear -hopefully one day I can write like this but this is a gift. It’s so flowy honestly it’s a great book. I can’t wait to read more!!!"

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Great book!

"I don't know what to say! It's a short story, but it contains emotions, as well as details that just strike my heart. It shows the pain of a woman and the happiness that she finds when her husband finally understands. The happiness that they both find when their child is born! Just amazing!"

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Stripped roses! Wow i liked this story alot!

"I read this story a few day ago and it stayed with me. The author has a real talent at nailing the feelings that one would have in the exact situation. I know many women have felt what Anna felt. The writing style was very clear and immersive. I felt like I was watching a movie and totally forgot I was reading. Those are my favorite type of readings. I really enjoyed this story"

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Stripped Roses

"Very strong start to Stripped Roses. The details and descriptives are great. Nice lead in for future work. There are so many places it can go from here, that I'm left with the longing to have more. Great job. "

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Stripped roses

"A great tale showing a relationship at two opposite ends of the spectrum. We particularly liked the reference to the sensitivity of smell during the pregnancy. Very well told. The only thing we wondered about was how well this couple would cope with the sleepless nights to come."

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Beautiful and emotional!

"Your writing has always been emotional to me, like you were etching your heart into every sentence, and this was no exception! I really really enjoyed it, the struggles of a newly married couple as they go through pregnancy and daily issues together. I think that Sean could have worked harder to be by her side, when she was crying in her room, or when she was angry. A hug could have certainly helped, but like all humans, this was flawed. So raw and real, I really enjoyed it! BTW, I do think that some descriptive bits were not necessary, like they were being repeated over and over just by using different word choices, you definitely don't need that much description to make this special. But I still liked it! Just be careful to never go overboard with it :) Love, Coffee."

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Beautiful

"Aww, whoa, this is amazing... I can relate to this so much... every sentence of this book... (although my husband worked security shifts at the time) but still... this brings back so many memories of myself... There were a few mistakes, but nothing serious... :) I love your writing style, it's unique and sweet and mature... :) Keep writing, sweetie... 🦋🤗 Jeez, it's true what you say though, about a child binding a relationship with strength, I can say it's true... it bonds a relationship, in love and strength... it's something no one can explain... having a child changes one's lives completely, in a lovable, positive way, something which you will never let go... 😭🤧🦋🤗💕 I LOVE this... 💕🤗🦋😘"

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Heart warming story

"The topic selected has been put into words beautifully. I was so thrilled to read how the tiny creature changed the lives of Anna and Sean. It made me wanna have a baby of my own😅 Even after being expressed in one chapter, it succeeded in covering so many emotions. Well done sis!"

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Stripped Roses

"I love how the story addresses real life problems. You definitely have your way of stringing words together in the most beautiful way. I love the emotions you have put in this story and it was simply phenomenal. I hope I get to read more of your works! "

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Beautiful

"I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Some pieces of writing work better as a short story, and others as a novel. This would work as either. With relatable and well rounded characters, the plot of the story is allowed to flourish in short order. I look forward to reading more of your work."

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Stripped Roses

"Aww~ I really loved the Story, I'm glad it had a happy ending haha, I thought it would be a sad ending like Anna and Sean would fight but..I really loved the ending, There were a few grammar issues but overall, Great Story! Keep Writing! "

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Wow!

"This is beautifully written! It's a very interesting story. The characters and their emotions were so beautifully described—it's truly heartwarming. There were minor grammatical errors but nothing obvious so I believe it's worth a five-star rating. I really love your book and I sincerely look forward to future updates."

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Lovely story!

"The author manages to convey so many complex feelings in just one chapter. Without giving many details, I felt immediately drawn to the characters. I'd love for this to turn into a series of short stories. A few grammar issues, but not worthy of taking a star away. Keep up the wonderful work!"

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Sweet & Heartwarming

"Such a sweet, heartwarming story about the trials of pregnancy and becoming new parents. While I have never had any children of my own, I think that everyone can appreciate the honesty within the short story. I can imagine that pregnancy can be tough for some mothers and considering the mother, Anna, is new to this adventure, perhaps it's especially hard. We see how frustrated she becomes with her husband who seems to be nonchalant about the situation and is angered by his passive role within the pregnancy. She also feels that he resents her for not being about to follow his dreams even though we're not quite sure what those dreams are and could possibly include her and his new child. I thought the author used great descriptions when describing their emotional turmoil and the pain one endures with pregnancy. I also particularly liked the actions of the father when he sees his newborn for the first time and how this baby becomes the center of both their worlds causing them to forget and, to me, forgive any tension or anger they had previously."

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