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Bad Blood

"The plot is not your cliché mafia romance! Loved the story buildup, amazing work on characters and truly unpredictable!! The best suspense story so far for me!!"

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"I. AM. OBSESSED. with this story. I've already read the other two works of Nour, my good friend, let me tell you, she is waaaayy too good with words and character development. She is freakingly talented and a pro at this game. Five words and The end and the beginning of everything (her stories) made me glued to the seat and read it in a full stretch because that is how amazing and spectacular her work is. You have to read this! This is the best of the best works! If you aren't a fan of her works and haven't any of her works already, I feel bad for you. I'll be utterly disappointed. So please, honour yourself with this fantabulous work by one of my favourite author and my good friend. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️"

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"(Read until the end of chapter 8) This book had a wonderful start, I loved how strong a young woman Aurora is. There is a lot of Mafia fiction where the women are submissive, or the men are domineering and controlling. But Aurora is strong, and Gabriel with his sarcasm, and trying to woo Aurora is actually quite sweet. The spelling and grammar is great, and the plot is riveting and page-turning. Keep up the great work! Sofia."

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Bad Blood

"This story is mind-blowing 🤯. Everything is just perfect in it. It's characters, plot and dialogues, everything. I wish all the best for this book. 🤗🥰"

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"Such a captivating story 🤯🤯🤯 Mind-blown 💥💥💥💥💥💥💥 -Kookie 🍪💕"

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Bad Blood

"This story dives straight into the action from the start sweeping the reader into this world and capturing their attention. The writing style is ingenious. The dialogue is realistic and there is so much depth to the characters. The plot is beautifully crafted and the descriptions are well done. Overall this story deserves 5 stars and was an entertaining and suspenseful read. Can't wait to read more!"

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Bad Blood

"From the very beginning of the book, the story is intense, and I absolutely love it! The dialogue, especially during the restaurant scene, had me on the edge of my seat. I love how descriptive the author is. I can't wait to dive more into this book! "

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Bad Blood

"At first look, I didn't think I'd like it, but then I was thinking 'I already added half your books to my reading list, so I might just well read it. The first chapter was a little confusing for reasons that had nothing with your writing skills. The plot - from what I could get from it - was great. The chapters here were written well and had just the right amount of detail you'd want in a third person's point of view type of book. Everyone loves a strong woman as the main character, yes? I would love to continue reading this book - how often do you update? loves! stay cynful!"

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Strong Story & MC

"Bad Blood is engaging from the beginning. I love when stories are action-packed from the start, and this is definitely the case with Bad Blood. The dialogue is realistic and intense. I like how the author shows us different characters' perspectives. It makes for a dynamic read. Aurora is a fantastic main character. She's strong, calculating, and intelligent, but she also has flaws, giving the opportunity for character development over the course of the story. I have two small points of feedback. This might be personal preference, but I find it a little hard to follow when most characters' names start with the same letter. I noticed that some commas are missing (nothing a beta reader can't help with!). Overall, this is a 5/5 story, and I'm excited to read more chapters once they're posted."

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Your plot had me hooked!

"Wow! This gave me goldfish syndrome. My mouth was hanging open in shock throughout. Brilliant writing, suspenseful story, realistic characters and amazing executions. Your writing style never failed to impress me. It's very addictive and intoxicating. It renders me speechless. There is no word to appraise your work, it's that stunning. This story binds you till the end, which is not a surprise, but seriously, the greatest accomplishment for any writer. The emotions are very explained well. This story was truly thrilling! I Loved it! I loved it so much that right in the middle of the fourth chapter; I didn’t want it to end! I wanted to envision more scenes. I could feel from the start that Aurora is a bold character, but she also has layers of emotions/feelings hiding underneath. The fear of losing her life, the fear of losing her family, and the anxieties that came along with those fears — everything was so realistic that I stopped seeing her as a fictional character after the first chapter. You’ve got excellent skills, and I’ve started envying you for that (in a good way). Aurora’s father, Vito, was a complicated character. He obviously loves his daughter and doesn’t want to leave a bad impression on her, but there’s certainly something, something rather menacing, he is hiding from her — something related to Alfonso’s daughter, apparently. And I’m dying to find out the secret behind his fear of Alfonso. The man who never seems to leave his throne under any circumstances, the man who never backed down from a fight. What got him so scared suddenly? Ooh, the questions are rising, and my head is about to burst. I can’t wait to read more! Please update soon."

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Bad Blood

"I absolutely loved this! The characters were brought up smoothly and the scenes were full of description and the writer has done a great job in creating this masterpiece! The plot sounds exciting and I can't wait to see what Aurora has in stock, yet to reveal. All the best and job well done!"

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Bad Blood

"The story is astonishing from the very first paragraph of the story. The plot has been created beautifully by the author. But only one little thing which bothered me was that at some points the sentences weren't smooth. It wasn't kinda easy to read in one go. I think because the chapters are too long. Overall, great story, inked by a talented writer. I will wait for the further chapters."

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Amazing!

"I love the plot and I am so excited to read what comes next! Only criticism is that there are a lot of grammar/word choice mistakes, but with some editing or a Beta Reader those can be easily fixed! Great job and I can't wait to see what happens!"

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Bad blood

"Like the fact that the book title reminds me to one of my favorite songs. Now moving to book, amazing story theirs this mesmerizing beginning. Always been a fan of tough female protagonist and this one has it. Well done 👏"

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Loved it so far

"The story starts with smashing the cliche as it depicts the female protagonist to be dominant and confident which is really refreshing. The beginning itself is amazing and I can't wait to read more of it. I enjoyed the way story is written making it easy for me to imagine. So far, I have loved reading it. "

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"Wow! I loved your work. I have read your other stories they were great and your this story is also amazing. I was hooked from the starting. Great work👏👏"

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Bad Blood

"Your story really knows how to grab the readers attention and I’m upset that there are only two chapters... keep going! ~ L."

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I can't wait to read more!

"You had my attention right from the beginning with your story, I literally felt shivers running down my spine while I read. Hope you upload more, cause I sure as hell can't wait for the rest."

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Love it!

"Wow! The summary really caught my attention and made me want to read more. Loved the first chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next in Aurora’s journey :)"

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Bad Blood

"I really enjoyed this. I'm a sucker for a strong heroine and look forward to reading what come next. I thought the writing was strong and I connected with all of the characters."

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