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A stunningly vast new world from an enthrallingly imaginative mind!

I truly enjoyed reading this book! The author has a very descriptive style, making it impossible not to picture, in vivid detail, every scene. This is coupled with first rate world building that engrosses the reader. The lore of the gods is fascinating and the shear scope of this world reflects the creative mind of the author. The early part of the book felt somewhat like a collection of fables. They introduced me to a new world and society as it was created. They then took me on a journey demonstrating how the gods loved and interacted with the humans they had created. The scenes involving the gods arguing amongst themselves as they watched over the humans gave me Clash of the Titans vibes. The thought and planning that obviously went into this book is astounding! Excellent work!

Great story

This is a very good book. I like the characters and the relationship between Krystal and Carter is great. There are a few grammatical errors, but nothing major, and nothing that won’t be fixed with a little editing. The plot, though familiar, is very engaging and the writing draws you in. Excellent work.

Vast world, exciting story

There is so much going on in this story. The author does a great job of revealing new things in every chapter rather than dropping it all on the reader at once. There are a lot of characters and each has their own personality. There are some grammatical errors, but I believe most of them come from the authors decision to change some of the text to first person rather than the original third. Some required changes have been missed, and it can make the reading somewhat confusing. With another round of editing, I’m sure these will be found and fixed. Overall, this is a great story. It is very clear that you have putt a lot of work and thought into this world.

Very interesting and unique

I really enjoyed this story. The author’s writing style is very unique, especially in the early chapters. The characters are great and the world is interesting and different. There were a few grammatical errors which I’m sure will be corrected with a quick edit, but the story is engaging enough that the errors don’t detract too much from the enjoyment of reading. There is some showing rather than telling, but it isn’t the worst example I’ve seen and it kind of works with the unique writing style. Overall this is well done, keep it up!

Solid plot, needs a little editing

So there is a good story here. There are some grammatical errors, but those can be fixed with some editing. The setting could use a little more description, but the plot is good. Overall this is a good story. Keep up the hard work!

A fantastic mythical adventure!

I love the story so far. There are a few grammatical errors and a couple instances of tense switching mid chapter, but these are nothing that can’t be fixed with a little editing. The plot and characters are excellent and I look forward to reading more.

Thought provoking

This is a deep, moving, thought provoking story that is beautifully written. The writing style is unique and intelligent. Keep up the good work.

Relic Huntress

I truly enjoyed reading this story and fully intend to read more. The character development is terrific, the dialogue is natural and witty, and the story is engaging. There is plenty of mystery to keep the reader interested and the characters are very relatable and enjoyable. This is a excellent book written by a talented author!

Engaging blend of YA romance and SciFi

I really like the juxtaposition of the different genres. It’s like The Selection meets a sci-fi story, and I really like it. The dreams and time-travelesque sequences are fantastic. There is plenty of mystery to keep you guessing as well. There are some grammatical/tense issues, but the author stated at the beginning that they are aware of these and has planned a round of editing when the book is finished. Once that is completed, this could be a five star book! Keep up the good work!

This has a Twilight Zone feel to it!

I really enjoyed this story. I heard Rod Serling from The Twilight Zone in my head as I read it. There are some good mysterious qualities to the story, and the voice she hears is a nice spooky addition. Nice job and keep updating!