What is your opinion?
Fantastic
"Unique plot, unique story! The characters are lovable and the text flows well! I enjoyed it immensely as it was easy to sink into the book and get immersed into it. The imagery is brilliant and I did not notice any major grammar mistakes!"
Chapter 1
"Nice book very distinctive, Awesome nice BFF"
Meticulously Crafted!
"This is certainly an impactful story! The writing is excellent and well-thought-out.. Definitely something I'd recommend anyone to check out. My only concerns were the bulky paragraphs that honestly made me want to turn away at points, the author uses actions as dialogue tags, but other than that it's enjoyable so far! Nothing major!"
Pretty good
"First off, I will like to comment on this style. It is unusual I should say, but it got me puzzled. Slowly getting longer, and retracting to create a level of depth I suppose to say. From what I can tell there is a division. Those pure breds are supposed to be above all else from what I can see, however. The character is not like them, due to being able to bleed. This is being looked down upon. So they try to hide it, but they cannot. It gives a good sense of norms, and how one can look down on another for being different. I do not think I noticed errors. It might just be the style of the writing, which works with it pretty well. Over all, I can recommend this."
OMG
"I Love This Book! I never would've thought I would, as it is far from what I would typically choose to read, but it was awesome! I would totally read it again :)"
Intriguing!
"This story has an interesting plot which hooks you up in the beginning. The writing style was awesome and I enjoyed every moment of reading it. "
Inspiring!
"I had never realised just how much difference short, powerful chapters could make to the plot of a story. Naturally, some stories require longer chapters. This one was perfect! I especially loved the comparisons between our world and his. Very creative, and a pleasure to read."
Blood Season
"I loved Blood Season, it was completely out of the box! Usually, if you want readers to enjoy and spread your work like a plague, you want the first chapters to be in your face, the readers want to know what the book's about. I did like your idea of the first couple of chapters being as short, as the story got kind of confusing in some parts. I noticed some grammatical errors, but nothing too big. The idea of Euphoria being a hell-like place popped into my mind, but I was thoroughly enjoyed by the calmer, but dangerous aspect of it. The imagination and thoughts put into this book are the things that made it feel real. At some points, I looked up at my walls and was confused as how I got back in my house! The writing was a bit messy at times, and the calendar days and dates were hard to keep up with. Maybe more of an in-depth explanation would boost the book in places. I also loved the idea of a multiverse kind of thing, it was interesting, but maybe explain the differences between earth and Euthoria. For me, if the interactions between earth, euthoria, and the angels were more explained, it would clear up some issues with understanding. Some future direction or foreshadowing for the final chapter would be a great way to kind of transition your readers into Yehain Conversates. I hope some of this has helped! -ArjinRose"
FAB!
"I love the complexities of Damian as a character. You are an amazing writer and I love your style as you carefully and judiciously build your magical world of action and desire. I've got chills!"
A Unique Read
"I have never managed to read thirty-something chapters so quickly. I was perplexed at first by the shorter than average chapters in the beginning--but as I dived in, I began to understand why. At first, I thought the author was leaving something to be desired. I wanted to know more, more about each character and their intentions. I wanted to know what they looked like, what they enjoyed doing, and what their pesky little habits were. As I read on, though, I found that this was indeed intentional. This author draws the reader in, leaves them dangling for the scraps, and then locks them up and forces them to go through every up and down this story has to offer. This is a very, very, very, very VERY good thing. I haven't really found a story that I could binge like this... in little under two hours. Fantastic read, fantastic style. I suggest sticking it through to the very end... things will hit you that you did not expect!"
Amazing!
"The way you write is amazing! Never go to far, yet managed to stay ever so slightly reined in. If I can even say that🤣! Don't know how it can get better, sorry. Punctuation, grammar, and plot everything was perfect! It is a story that never let's you down! Truly softens you up and drags you in! LOVELOVELOVE this story! When I'm fully done I'm going to rerereread it! Fabulous plot and exemplary content! I can't say enough good about this story! Thanks Yehann! xx -Bloody Flames-Your Friend-"
Very creative
"I love the imagination and detail you have put into this book! I can definitely tell that there was a lot of thought and planning that went into this book and it is amazing. It definitely should be published professionally."
A captivating story!
"I found the world of Euthoia to be incredibly enjoyable. The author has a simplistic, flowing style of writing that successfully works to enrapture the reader. While devouring this tale I saw the world of Euthoia come alive before my eyes. I would definitely recommend it. Possibly my one criticism so far would be that the writing can be a bit muddled, such as when Yehan described how the days of Euthoia work. I feel like that could have been more clearly depicted. There were also a few grammatical mistakes that could use some brushing up. Overall, this story was a very enjoyable way to spend my afternoon!"
A rather fun read, witty dialogue and great characters ...
"this is a great story, very engaging, with unusual characters that one can really feel close to. Well plotted and created! I would recommend this to anyone curious to try a story in a class all its own "
Fascinatingly immersive
"This is a diamond among gems. I love the structure in which you lay it out and describe the culture and showcase the way of the worlds, its informative, it draws you in and makes you truly believe that Euthoia (excuse my spelling ) It exists. It's not long, its flashy, pungent and striking so its easy to read and easy to immerse yourself. I truly love it! I really admire your style and hope that more read it. You have written literary gold!"
Blood Season
"I can't believe how underrated this book is! People should definitely see this! The characters are so unique and each has its own unique personality. What I loved is how different everyone talked. Everyone had their own "style" of talking and each had their own personality. Of course, there were some spelling mistakes (I'm not trying to nitpick). I can't wait to read more. Great work, author!"
Very interesting and unique
"I really enjoyed this story. The author’s writing style is very unique, especially in the early chapters. The characters are great and the world is interesting and different. There were a few grammatical errors which I’m sure will be corrected with a quick edit, but the story is engaging enough that the errors don’t detract too much from the enjoyment of reading. There is some showing rather than telling, but it isn’t the worst example I’ve seen and it kind of works with the unique writing style. Overall this is well done, keep it up!"
Hooks you right from the beginning
"Blood Season is a special kind of book in my opinion. The way the book is written makes the reader feel more involved and more inside the book itself. With each detail given, it kept adding onto my imagination of what the world of Euothia looks like. The way that the book is told in is unique. Now, because of the way I personally read it, it almost seems as though the protagonist is writing in a diary or a journal. I personally enjoy this style because it makes me feel like I'm the protagonist and or it makes me feel like the protagonist is talking to me. This book is a good book for someone anyone who has even the slightest bit of imagination. This kind of book would make many people become crazy in love with it if they enjoy the fantasy and sci-fi genres. Whether a person likes one or the other, the 2 of them have an equal balance and are well portrayed by the author."
MIND-BLOWING
"I really loved the concept and execution!! That being said, a few concerns. The first few chapters were interesting, but I feel that considering the rest of the book, they could be even more so. I would hate for a reader to miss out on the amazing story because they are bored with the first few chapters. Along those lines, some paragraphs were *extremely* long, and it would be helpful to limit a paragraph to 3-4 sentences so that the reader's gaze doesn't *skip* past them. Similarly, the chapters (especially the first few) would really enjoy a showing/telling scan. You have so much scope for showing, don't resort to info-dumping. Now, that aside, this story is mind-blowing. I would recommend it to anyone and everyone because of its beautiful execution and the characters... you really, really have a skill with characters. This story is unique because it gives a biting social commentary without even being centered around humans. I hope you keep writing and keep sharing your gifts with the world! x Vanessa"
good
"I really liked your plot and your characters really are memorable. There was also a lack of noticeable technical errors which was amazing. However, I think your world building could be improved. I would have preferred to discover the world along with the characters and not read an encyclopedic description on it. Overall, your book shows promise and I would love to read more of your writing"
